Flash
[This thread is a spinoff from a conversation about flash fiction.]
Marcus, the link to Gardner is jazz, it's strategy and tactics, it's one view of what flash is made of.
I don't write flash fiction, and don't read a lot of it (maybe I should, explode some assumptions).
Would like to read other examples of things people think are exceptionally well done.
For me, the short, short fiction has either been wanting for more words/more narrative, or more poetry - and by that I mean "texture": charged words, internal rhyme, balance, etc. It needs to be handled very delicately, and that's hard to find.
You know, speaking about using flash to "scale up," if you will, into a longer work...I like to do the opposite. Take what I think could be a longer form and compress it, distill it, into just the elements that a reader needs to find their way. In my mind it's poetry for people that don't read poetry, or poetry that is slightly narrative, and it risks being obscure, or being too minimal, too spare.




Comments
Aaaaaanwaaaay….It looks as if the earliest (pre-modernist) example of a prose poem is Charles Baudelaire’s “Paris Spleen”— roughly a century earlier than Edson (I'm indebted to Sam Rasnake for telling me about "Paris Spleen" in the first place). Baudelaire has got interesting things to say about the form (in a letter to A. Houssaye). Some are a little overheated, perhaps typical for that period and style: He seems to suggest the prose poem as a form more suitable to what would later be called stream of consciousness. Elsewhere he talks enthusiastically about the freedom of the prose writer: All of which confirms that the prose poem at least originally, when compared to (most of) 19th century poetry, seems to allow the poet certain liberties and tools “of a story”. So far, so good.
What now, about the prose poem vs. flash fiction? Your inference was that flash fiction is “centered around character” and I fully agree with that, even with your suggestion that these flash characters could be expanded into a novel.
This is exactly the way I work at current, though technically it’s rather the fictional character himself that does the expanding and exploring: all I have to do is, on the page and in my mind, provide more space than the measly 100-1000 words that are typically allowed him.
Let’s look at an example. The editor (Sam Rasnake, an accomplished poet) who published “Cahiers du Cinéma” in his magazine Blue Fifth Review insisted on calling it a prose poem rather than flash fiction. (I challenged him on it and he held firm.) The piece consists of 9 paragraphs. At first it seems to satisfy your criteria of “more contained” but at the same time, every section contains at least one new character: a woman from Norway, parachuting soldiers, a love in South America, a trans-sexual postdoc, a wife, a dead friend…and only in the end the narrator, a vampire, narrows the story down to himself and his philosophy of life. It seems to me that every section could be turned into a novel or a longer narrative. That every character (besides the narrator) is encapsulated enough to warrant unfolding and growing beyond the confines of its paragraph. Clearly there’s a story here, too. Yet, a connoisseur sees it as a poem.
I’m not sure I’ve come very far here or added anything to what you’ve said (apart from my own example)—the difference between prose poem and flash fiction still somewhat eludes me. Perhaps the confusion is owed to the fact that we live in thoroughly experimental, postmodern times where nobody likes to find himself stuck in a specific structural or formal corner anymore. This stuckness may have meant comfort and certainty to our literary ancestors, while today we only see it as narrow. As a maker, I’m personally more interested in telling stories than in broadening the canon or innovating.
As a working hypothesis, at the end of these considerations, it seems to me as if perhaps prose poem and flash story are indistinguishable as such, but look different depending on the direction of approach: when you come at the same text from the poet's side, you see a prose poem (the freedom Baudelaire talks about); when you come at it from the novel, novella or short story, you see a flash—distinguished mostly by its brevity.
Also, I love what Bolano has to say about poetry and fiction.
And it is indeed.
But whatever you say about the interchangeability of forms (a contentious issue in criticism, I suppose:I will stubbornly hold onto my own label! Perhaps my position is a remnant of reading Dorothee Brande's "Becoming a Writer". The book aims at working with the writer's unconscious towards helping him identify if he is a short story writer, a novelist or a non-fiction writer (or, alas, not a writer at all). There are simpler methods, of course, to find that out (the simplest probably being: what do you like to read—that never worked for me).
Maybe we're not talking about the same thing here. What matters to me, for my process, for the way I see myself when I get up and go to my desk to write, may be irrelevant to your view — "a writer is a writer" indeed — if the content of the toolbox or the self-perceptions would dominate the writing, all writing would inevitably (and miserably) turn into meta-fiction. You're right of course that everybody has got one and can choose what to take from it. And furthermore, that the tools and their use are largely unconscious & work well that way.
Faulkner: pleased to hear he wrote poems at first, too. His novels could be labeled as "densely lyrical", so no surprise there. I expect Virginia Woolf to have done the same. But, picking up your approach: why label? We'll have to drop it and do what we do, at least I shall have to...
The Bolaño quote is interesting & I have no doubt that we're heading for more experimental forms — I feel that's appropriate for a new millennium, too. If these new forms will flop with the readers in the same way in which new classical music flops with the masses, I don't know. People seem to take to flash fiction more than they ever took to prose poems. And like all small and very small animals, flash undergoes a rapid evolution.
In closing, I'm reminded of Jeanette Winterson's article in the Guardian a few days ago (about the Booker Prize éclat), which beautifully sums up why I feel like a novelist and why you perhaps aren't all that wrong seeing tools as a bridge between poetic and not-so-poetic, short and long forms: