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Electric Feel

Electric Feel

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  1. The Questionable Existence of Her Dream World 1 year ago (Published)
Rhiannon Argo
Lo, a young queer woman with a neurological disorder, has become disenchanted with her un-motivated life in Portland, Oregon, so she embarks on an adventure to search for a missing ex-lover named Savvy. Lo's investigation forces her to explore the powerful effects of her own memories of Savvy and how one electric night in her past altered her world forever.

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David Buchta 7 March 2012 - 8:45pm
Rhiannon, it seems like can either post the revised chapter, delete the old one, then move the new one to its correct position, or edit the old chapter and clear the text and paste in the new stuff. Both have worked for me so far.

P.S. I really enjoyed this, a lot of your phrases are spot on and the whole thing rings really true to me.
Rhiannon Argo 21 February 2012 - 4:08pm
Thanks Jana! I actually am working on a rewrite of the entire book so the first few chapters have changed. I am still learning how to work this site so I'm not sure how to remove the old version and add the new. I will try this now!
Jana McCall 20 February 2012 - 12:45am
I really like how you write, I want to read this book. Are there more chapters?
Rhiannon Argo 7 February 2012 - 2:36pm
Thanks for the feedback Gabe! Mucho appreciated :)
Gabe Wollenburg 25 January 2012 - 3:54pm
This is good stuff. I hope you've got more, I'd really like to know where you're taking it. I like the newage sort of teetering on the edge of something magic thing you've got going with the epilepsy, and I really enjoyed the tone and timber of the narrator. I wonder where Lo's adventures will take her and what will happen when she gets there. Please keep going!

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